Hello bloggers, This is my favorite piece of writing from this month. Would you like a troll as a pet?
Start your writing here (remember to add a simile, metaphor or hyperbole): One sunny morning I was happily lying on my bed, Suddenly a beam of light came straight through my roof, I thought the beam of light was coming out of my window but then my roof started lifting off. I saw a big grassy hand holding the roof, I screamed as loud as I could “AHHHHHHHH”. Quickly I jumped out of my bed then ran out the front door, He was sooooooo ugly. His nose looked like a mouse nose, He had crumbled dirt dribbling out his mouth, and be had trees coming out of his back. I ran like the flash down past the houses. He was trying the chase me down the street but he was a bit wobbly though. As he was following me he kept shouting “come on over mate, I won’t hurt you” I was soooo scared I couldn’t look back.
Kia ora Wilbur, this is great writing! Next time you could try to add a few more interesting sentence starters to make it even more engaging for the reader. I think a troll would be interesting to have as a friend, I don't think they would like to be kept as a pet. blog you later :) Megan
ReplyDeleteHi Wilbur my name is Hibiscus I'm from room 6.
ReplyDeleteYou did a nice work I like how you are talking about him. I think you did a great job at your work.
Would you do a other one????
Blog ya later!!