Hello bloggers, over the last couple of days my class and I have been writing about a mysterious shadow. It did not take that long to make. Have you been doing writing this term?
Silently the big black shadow started creeping to an emerald green wooden gate. He started fiddling with the big strong lock, he was making A LOT of noise.
There were 5 people in the house that the shadow was trying to get into, the Mum, Dad, Son, Daughter and the butler. The butler got woken up and slowly peered through the window. He saw a HUGE ghost trying to unlock the gate. The butler called the cops and came in less than 5 minutes. When they found the ghost they caught him then he went to jail.
The END!
Hello Wilbur,
ReplyDeleteI like your writing and the suspense in it. I like in the start the description. I like that the butler wittedly called upon help before the ghost woke up anyone. It was a short story though and I think there could have been a bit more in it.
Blog you later, Caleb
Thank you for the comment Caleb!!!
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