Hello bloggers this is my writing I did about 2 divers and a Whale Shark. It didn't take that long, it took about 20-30 minutes. Do you like Whale Sharks.
(Here is a picture of the image we had to write about)
One day I was diving with my friend Mathematical Will. We had huge air tanks that made us be able to breath under water but… only for 30 minutes.
As we were diving a COLOSSAL whale shark approached us. We were so terrified, our body was shaking like we were on those massage chairs that you stand on. We were so scared that we totally forgot about the time before the air tanks ran out.
The whale shark was getting closer and closer until reaching us. We were calmly swimming away from the sharks like we were ninjas. The shark easily caught up to us and swallowed us whole.
I fainted for so long I died because my air tank ran out of oxygen. Lucky Mathematical Will didn’t faint and got out safely and survived.
A few days later me and Mathematical Will were on the news paper about my death and how cool it was that Mathematical Will survived. We were very famous. The queen even heard about the news and Mathematical Will got knighted. THE END
Hey there Wilbur, hope you are doing good. You still don't know who I am OK I am Asfan from Room 23. First of all what an incredibly jaw breaking enthusiastically story you have done. I loved it and well those words are nothing in front of the story you have written. I am going to say this, you could become a author in the future actually. Thanks for sharing your learning. OK I know this is a too little comment alright here you go - What is your favorite land animal? Check out my Blog
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Kia Ora, my name is John and I'm from Room 23 I really liked your blog post about Whale Shark Writing. Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog
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